Hero's Opening Scene

[jediaction]

Everyone has been waiting for this and this is the opening for my Hero's game. This is just the peek for the game. Im gonna make it so good that you cant wait for the game. I jsut need to fix the frae rate for my game and its getting SO FRUSTRATED so meirs is doing what ever he can and if i can get it fixed it will post it. Some time this march ill finish the game and post it. This opening video i dont know when but i will post it before the game. Im am not done with the video yet but this is what i got so far. I did not add details but I will to make it look more real. This is it so enjoy...

[jediaction]

I voted yes because i want to continue but what are yer votes

[Veryuhbull]

I thought it was good. I liked the camera shake effect. Overall good job. The audio sounded like it was recorded with a mic to speakers. There are ways of getting direct audio to increase sound quaility. I have other nit-picky stuff.

-the blood splatter could be improve on by using a smoke texture on the sphere.
-the main guy has his leg pass through the plans hanger door when he jumps
-when he is looking around i noticed the next scene's pieces in the distance. Another ranger object and the cowboy are visible. I assume this is meant to be the same person. He is in two places.
-I am assuming you are planning to continue the clip, but when it ends it looks like the jet is simply floating above the ground.

[jediaction]

Sorry,ill fix it right away. I thought it was spelled right but can you please tell me the other picky little stuff you said you dont want to say but in a privet message. I need to know all problems to make it the best

[jediaction]

I thought it was good. I liked the camera shake effect. Overall good job. The audio sounded like it was recorded with a mic to speakers. There are ways of getting direct audio to increase sound quaility. I have other nit-picky stuff.

-the blood splatter could be improve on by using a smoke texture on the sphere.
-the main guy has his leg pass through the plans hanger door when he jumps
-when he is looking around i noticed the next scene's pieces in the distance. Another ranger object and the cowboy are visible. I assume this is meant to be the same person. He is in two places.
-I am assuming you are planning to continue the clip, but when it ends it looks like the jet is simply floating above the ground.


Yes, the two places at once. I said its not finished and its not detailed yet thats why i said im still working on it. Thanks for pointing out