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NEED MORE! 2 66.67%
Look's good. I'll follow this. 0 0%
Look's ok. It's decent. 1 33.33%
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Default My Role-playing Game - 07-28-2009, 04:44 PM

This would be a demo/prologue. It is simplly for now just to showcase bulk of the foundation engine I have planned for this RPG. (This will also have a fighting component as well. Not included.)

Tell me what you think, and how I can improve. I have a lot planned just not implemented yet.

The story will be much deeper as I build, but it is not a dark, brooding, antsy, RPG of today. so sorry.

EDIT1: July 29, 2009, 3:33. (I added some scenery, more plot, and shortened the length of the meaningless walking.)

EDIT2: August 3, 2009, 6:36 (added part 2, updated some other things, added more characters) IT'S UP!!! (this verison is not perfect. needs more debug time.)
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Default 07-28-2009, 05:51 PM

I really like what you've done with that, great work. I hope you finish this.

I'm actually working on two RPG's with different combat systems. If you'd like help making yours, or would like to look at one of the ones I'm making, feel free to ask.


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Default 07-29-2009, 05:55 PM

small update.
   
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Default 07-30-2009, 02:10 AM

Still very good. I do like the fact that the text is more organized now.


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Default 08-04-2009, 10:49 AM

Thanks X, I have done more and WILL have an update tonight.

EDIT: Update is coming Tomorrow morning. I am ready I swear. My Computer is not working properly. Check tomorrow. I am so sorry.

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Default 08-04-2009, 10:58 PM

Not a problem. Just builds suspense.


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Talking PART 2 finished. - 08-05-2009, 10:17 AM

Your story continues.

(I spent 4-5 hours on this yesterday. I went to upload it and had ten minutes before I had to leave and my computer wouldn't let me upload the file. So I fixed the posts barely before the comp crashes. This morning I restarted the comp and copied the file to my usb. I went to a different computer to upload this level.)

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Default 08-05-2009, 12:16 PM

Very nice. I like the way the story is progressing.

I have a few suggestions, though. I think that there should be an option to talk to characters again after they've "fulfilled their role" so to speak. Also, the characters should probably move from their action poses (like Leaf putting his hand back down when he's done giving you the berries, or Zen putting her arms down when she's done thinking).


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Default 08-05-2009, 12:30 PM

Thanks. That's a good idea and should be easy to add. Some have a second converstaion but most don't. I'll clear that up then develop my combat engine.

EDIT: I've added/fixed stuff. Update coming soon. I will make another topic to better descibe this ongoing devolpment.

Here is the thread.
http://alice.org/community/showthread.php?t=2946

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