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Default 01-23-2012, 05:28 AM

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Highlighting one error in that post is kind of like saying "Hey, I think Mario ate a mushroom once."
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I didn't and I noticed that I posted the wrong thing. The one I wanted to post was one of jedi's 'Hand Models.a2w' because I thought that if the thread was just beginning, more people would find the world more easily instead of looking through the WHOLE COMMUNITY. I was going to give credit until I realized I posted the wrong world. GameKid, if I posted one of your worlds on a fresh thread that would be giving it twice as many downloads, and you'd still get credit because I don't believe in plagiarism (I think that's how you spell it????) Sorry guys for ripping you off BY ACCIDENT (I think that's how you spell that too). I was going to post the 'Hand Models' world that jedi made so do you mind posting it? because I think I deleted it.
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Default 01-23-2012, 07:56 AM

Most teachers don't edit for flow, they edit basic grammar, punctuation, and spelling, and just say the flow needs work.

At least that's how all but one of my teachers worked.

I did have one teacher that crossed out entire sentences in my essays and replaced them with ones he wrote.


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Default 01-23-2012, 04:17 PM

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Highlighting one error in that post is kind of like saying "Hey, I think Mario ate a mushroom once."



Errors in red.

I'm very disappointed.
He spoke as if he was wondering how to spell it.


[COLOR=e4eaf2]Your text here[/COLOR]
Come on, you know you want to try it.
   
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Default 01-29-2012, 06:10 AM

FINALLY FOUND IT! THANK GOD! (and X).
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What a piece of work is a man? How noble in reason, how infinite in faculties, in form and in motion, how express and admirable how like an angel! What apprehension oh how like a god! The beauty of thee world, the paragon of animals, and yet- to me, what is this quintessence o' dust? Man delights, not me. Nor woman either, nor woman either.
   
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Default 01-29-2012, 07:29 AM

Oh those.

Yeah, some of them are pretty cool, but a bunch are poorly textured.

They were like that when I converted them, though, so it's not my fault.


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Default 01-29-2012, 08:02 AM

Its okay, i thought these models were pretty cool, so i wanted to post them but i had deleted it because i saved EVERY object into the Alice gallery.


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