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Default 01-22-2012, 07:47 PM

Ok, I have fixed the problem. Now 2.0 also has a few sound effects.

@Jediaction - Will you please review the newer version?


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Default 01-23-2012, 10:58 AM

Yes.


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Default 01-27-2012, 08:42 AM

well I don't do ratings or such, but I will try to point out some negatives and positives and give advice.

Important: just because I say there are negatives,doesn't mean it's the end of the world, they are just issues that need to be worked on.

Negatives
1.) lackluster amount of AI (enemies)
2.) lack of scenery
3.) gun was able to keep shooting after being empty
4.) the controls were very awkward (unorganized feeling)

Positives
1.) this is a good start for a new user to alice
2.) had health and bullet counters that worked decently well
3.) Had a decent AI(enemy) which wasn't to fast or slow and caused damage
4.) Had multiple weapons
5.) Good start to a game that could get better

Advice: At an overall glance, this was not a bad start to an alice game for a new user. There were some strong points and weak points. So some advice I would like to give is to try to add more scenery(remember objects off in a distance can give a satisfying feeling that it's an actual filled world and not a blank canvas) And try making the controls a little less awkward(or cramped) instead of having your "a" and "d" button move side to side(or strafing) and have those two keys be your keys to turn side to side. This puts all the basic movements of your character to one hand, which allows the other hand to be used to switch weapons or jump etc.. And lastly, make sure to have all your methods done fully so they don't allow glitches (such as the gun being able to keep firing after having an empty clip)


If you are stuck on a project, check out the tutorials I made here at this link:

http://alice.org/community/showthread.php?p=36778#post36778

There are lots of tutorials on it so far, including some youtube videos, check it out

Or..

Go to my youtube channel to check out my alice 2.2 tutorials I have there..

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Default 01-27-2012, 04:12 PM

Well it's nice to see a load of members take on the reviewing. I think it's a good idea that more people are reviewing. It gives the creators a lot more feedback than a normal post.

Feedback...

Pros:

Great Music
Fun
Decent AI
Collisions

Cons:

Lacking Gun Sound Effects
Short
Not very interesting

Overall

55/100 by Chrome Games
DECENT

Alright, it has improved since your last version but it could still use a lot of work. The Indiana Jones Theme Song worked, but the lack of gun sounds was very obvious. The collisions for the Scare Crow prevented it from even getting near me. it glitched out to if I went to a certain position. The fun only lasts about a minute or so untli I feel like closing the game because there is no challenge.


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Default 01-30-2012, 01:57 PM

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Well it's nice to see a load of members take on the reviewing. I think it's a good idea that more people are reviewing. It gives the creators a lot more feedback than a normal post.

Feedback...

Pros:

Great Music
Fun
Decent AI
Collisions

Cons:

Lacking Gun Sound Effects
Short
Not very interesting

Overall

55/100 by Chrome Games
DECENT

Alright, it has improved since your last version but it could still use a lot of work. The Indiana Jones Theme Song worked, but the lack of gun sounds was very obvious. The collisions for the Scare Crow prevented it from even getting near me. it glitched out to if I went to a certain position. The fun only lasts about a minute or so untli I feel like closing the game because there is no challenge.
it does have gun sound effects.


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Default 01-30-2012, 01:59 PM

ya, its not very interesting so I am going to stop working on it. I already have another helicopter game that I worked on over the weekend that has levels and upgrades so I'll post that and then try out something else.


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