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My First Game - need tips!
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Exclamation My First Game - need tips! - 06-12-2011, 09:02 PM

Hey Everyone! This is my first post and first creation that I have ever posted
on Alice Fourms . I really need tips for my game that I just made awhile ago.

The instructions are in the comments in the coding.

Before rating, you need to tell me whats wrong so that I can improve
my game


The Chase

look at the attached file

Thanks in Advance!

Jones989

V. 1.5.3 (New Version)
V. 4.0 (Newer Version)
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File Type: a2w The Chase v 1.4.a2w (6.65 MB, 18 views)

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Default 06-13-2011, 10:35 AM

The controls are wrong, it's arrow keys to move and click to shoot.


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Exclamation Oh!!!!! - 06-13-2011, 11:19 AM

Oh my gosh! i'm so dumb. changing it right away.
   
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Default 06-13-2011, 11:25 AM

LMB Mean Left Mouse Button just to tell you.

Here's the updated version.

EDIT: BEFORE YOU RATE ON MY GAME, YOU NEED TO SAY WHAT NEEDS IMPROVEMENT
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Default 06-13-2011, 12:52 PM

I'll look at it later on.
   
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Default 06-13-2011, 01:36 PM

I was just working on it and this is my newer version:

The Chase

V. 1.5

There's a thing you need to find that gives
you something "Special". *WINK*WINK*NUDGE*NUDGE
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Thumbs up 06-13-2011, 01:52 PM

Your game is improving keep it up. One thing you should change is the fog, the blue looks odd, but if you like the blue then that's alright. You should also change the while<cheat!>is true do..., to when<cheat>becomes true, you can do this by right clicking the event and going to the change to drop down menu.


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Question 06-13-2011, 02:09 PM

Thanks legolizard! Should I make the fog less dense or keep it like it is? I'm going to do the changes you suggested and see if I like the way it comes out.

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Default 06-13-2011, 02:15 PM

I like the way it came out. I should of thought of making the fog no color. I also did the "During "cheat!"" thing. Thanks again!

Here's the newest Version:

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V. 1.5.3
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Default 06-13-2011, 03:57 PM

Wow! You are really dedicated to your program! Since the last time I checked this thread, three new versions have showed up!
   
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