My First Game - need tips!
 

Hey Everyone! This is my first post and first creation that I have ever posted
on Alice Fourms :D. I really need tips for my game that I just made awhile ago.

The instructions are in the comments in the coding.

[SIZE="4"]Before rating, you need to tell me whats wrong so that I can improve
my game[/SIZE]

[SIZE="3"][COLOR="Red"]The Chase[/COLOR][/SIZE]

look at the attached file

Thanks in Advance!

Jones989

V. 1.5.3 (New Version)
V. 4.0 (Newer Version)

The controls are wrong, it's arrow keys to move and click to shoot.

Oh!!!!!
 

Oh my gosh! i'm so dumb. changing it right away.

LMB Mean Left Mouse Button just to tell you.

Here's the updated version.

EDIT: BEFORE YOU RATE ON MY GAME, YOU NEED TO SAY WHAT NEEDS IMPROVEMENT

I'll look at it later on.

I was just working on it and this is my newer version:

[CENTER][COLOR="Red"][B][SIZE="3"]The Chase[/SIZE][/B][/COLOR][/CENTER]

V. 1.5

There's a thing you need to find that gives
you something "Special". *WINK*WINK*NUDGE*NUDGE

Your game is improving keep it up.:) One thing you should change is the fog, the blue looks [I]odd[/I], but if you like the blue then that's alright. You should also change the while<cheat!>is true do..., to when<cheat>becomes true, you can do this by right clicking the event and going to the change to drop down menu.

Thanks legolizard! Should I make the fog less dense or keep it like it is? I'm going to do the changes you suggested and see if I like the way it comes out.

I like the way it came out. I should of thought of making the fog no color. I also did the "During "cheat!"" thing. Thanks again!

Here's the newest Version:

[COLOR="Red"][SIZE="3"][B]The Chase[/B][/SIZE][/COLOR]

V. 1.5.3

Wow! You are really dedicated to your program! Since the last time I checked this thread, three new versions have showed up!