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Jones989 06-12-2011 09:02 PM

My First Game - need tips!
 
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Hey Everyone! This is my first post and first creation that I have ever posted
on Alice Fourms :D. I really need tips for my game that I just made awhile ago.

The instructions are in the comments in the coding.

[SIZE="4"]Before rating, you need to tell me whats wrong so that I can improve
my game[/SIZE]

[SIZE="3"][COLOR="Red"]The Chase[/COLOR][/SIZE]

look at the attached file

Thanks in Advance!

Jones989

V. 1.5.3 (New Version)
V. 4.0 (Newer Version)

DensetsuNoKaboom 06-13-2011 10:35 AM

The controls are wrong, it's arrow keys to move and click to shoot.

Jones989 06-13-2011 11:19 AM

Oh!!!!!
 
Oh my gosh! i'm so dumb. changing it right away.

Jones989 06-13-2011 11:25 AM

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LMB Mean Left Mouse Button just to tell you.

Here's the updated version.

EDIT: BEFORE YOU RATE ON MY GAME, YOU NEED TO SAY WHAT NEEDS IMPROVEMENT

David B 06-13-2011 12:52 PM

I'll look at it later on.

Jones989 06-13-2011 01:36 PM

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I was just working on it and this is my newer version:

[CENTER][COLOR="Red"][B][SIZE="3"]The Chase[/SIZE][/B][/COLOR][/CENTER]

V. 1.5

There's a thing you need to find that gives
you something "Special". *WINK*WINK*NUDGE*NUDGE

legolizard 06-13-2011 01:52 PM

Your game is improving keep it up.:) One thing you should change is the fog, the blue looks [I]odd[/I], but if you like the blue then that's alright. You should also change the while<cheat!>is true do..., to when<cheat>becomes true, you can do this by right clicking the event and going to the change to drop down menu.

Jones989 06-13-2011 02:09 PM

Thanks legolizard! Should I make the fog less dense or keep it like it is? I'm going to do the changes you suggested and see if I like the way it comes out.

Jones989 06-13-2011 02:15 PM

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I like the way it came out. I should of thought of making the fog no color. I also did the "During "cheat!"" thing. Thanks again!

Here's the newest Version:

[COLOR="Red"][SIZE="3"][B]The Chase[/B][/SIZE][/COLOR]

V. 1.5.3

David B 06-13-2011 03:57 PM

Wow! You are really dedicated to your program! Since the last time I checked this thread, three new versions have showed up!

Jones989 06-13-2011 04:44 PM

well... there just small updates that I just made a few changes to each one.

David B 06-13-2011 04:55 PM

[QUOTE=Jones989;37389]well... there just small updates that I just made a few changes to each one.[/QUOTE]

Yeah. I know that, but still.

Jones989 06-13-2011 04:57 PM

Whatever. It's the only project i'm working on and I want it to be as good as possible.

Jones989 06-13-2011 06:30 PM

Anymore tips today? Anyone? :D

Jones989 06-13-2011 08:53 PM

One More!!!!!! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

jediaction 06-14-2011 07:37 AM

You have gotten an awful lot of replies in one day, you posted in the hot spot and at the perfect time. Good job, as of the game, I have not played it yet, but I will review it if it has potential. I will play it later

Jones989 06-14-2011 08:51 AM

Ok. Thanks a lot. I want to improve my game as much as possible. :D

David B 06-14-2011 09:20 AM

I finally got to play it, and it does have potential.

Jones989 06-14-2011 08:39 PM

That's cool

[SIZE="1"]what does that mean?[/SIZE]

arty-fishL 06-22-2011 05:17 PM

I was testing the AODb, came across this, I'm downloading it now. It looks like it will be good, and as posted above - I can see you are dedicated.

I hope your usage of the AODb was OK, it is currently undergoing lots of work, but you seemed to use it fine anyway. Thankyou for your service.

Jones989 06-28-2011 11:12 PM

Hey Arty-FishL,

Your website is actually really awesome! :D

I used to try to make websites, but yours is way better than I ever got to. One improvment on your website is if you could make it not mess up if you don't put "http://" in front of the link.

Cheers

Jones989

arty-fishL 06-29-2011 08:34 AM

[QUOTE=Jones989;38202]Hey Arty-FishL,

Your website is actually really awesome! :D

I used to try to make websites, but yours is way better than I ever got to. One improvment on your website is if you could make it not mess up if you don't put "http://" in front of the link.

Cheers

Jones989[/QUOTE]Thanks. I'm making a new site for it, the one in my signature is old now, its just taking a while because I've not got had a lot of free time to work on it. It should be up soon enough. The one you see uses a website WYSIWYG builder (and some python), but the new one is pure html, css, javascript, python and php.

Jones989 06-29-2011 11:03 PM

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That's awesome! I hope it goes well! Also, on topic, I made a new update to my game "The Chase". I will put a link on this post and the Main post.

Cheer and GL! :D

Jones989

Jones989 08-26-2011 05:20 PM

^ Bump :D

jediaction 08-26-2011 07:52 PM

It's ok. The cowboy moves very unbalanced though. The gun range works, but it should shoot faster. Everything else is fine. Just keep adding as much as you can.


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