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Thumbs up Dodge ball 3 - 09-30-2011, 03:27 PM

Finally, after 3 weeks of painstaking work, I have finally finished it. Now sense this is the first version, its gonna have glitched, but if you guys find any big ones, or just plain annoying ones, tell me and I will fix them ASAP. But I have gotten rid of as many glitches as I could, so have fun!
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Default 09-30-2011, 03:46 PM

Cool! The first part was challenging and fun, and took some strategy. The second part where you are suppose to "Last" 30 seconds. I didn't know what to do. I saw bouncing balls when I was at the menu, but the went over the wall and were gone. I'm asuming* that they were supossed to stay there. If this is fixed it will be a great game.


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Default 09-30-2011, 04:56 PM

Great! Downloading right now!


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Default 09-30-2011, 07:06 PM

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Pros:

Nice title sequence
Very good effects
Good concept


Cons:

A bit annoying

Overall

83/100 by Chrome Games
EXCELLENT

The first thing that stood out to me was that when you completed waiting 30 seconds, if you die after that, you have to restart. It would of been nice if the red balls dissapeared instead of kept moving. The flickering balls in the beginning are annoying and make it hard to memorize the path. The menu sequence is well made but is a little slow. I like the nothing button in the menu, that is funny. THe flickering "3" "2" "3" checkpoint thing is annoying also. I don't know what happens if you move and hit the checkpoint on 2, but that should just be left simple and plain "3". I enjoyed this game a lot but wished there were some sounds to make the atmosphere of the game more exciting. The timer is very well done and I apprecitate all the levels. Over all, good job!


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Default 09-30-2011, 07:21 PM

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Feedback...

Pros:

Nice title sequence
Very good effects
Good concept


Cons:

A bit annoying

Overall

83/100 by Chrome Games
EXCELLENT

The first thing that stood out to me was that when you completed waiting 30 seconds, if you die after that, you have to restart. It would of been nice if the red balls dissapeared instead of kept moving. The flickering balls in the beginning are annoying and make it hard to memorize the path. The menu sequence is well made but is a little slow. I like the nothing button in the menu, that is funny. THe flickering "3" "2" "3" checkpoint thing is annoying also. I don't know what happens if you move and hit the checkpoint on 2, but that should just be left simple and plain "3". I enjoyed this game a lot but wished there were some sounds to make the atmosphere of the game more exciting. The timer is very well done and I apprecitate all the levels. Over all, good job!
dont quite understand, you know that after every time you get past 25/30 seconds, you have to get the checkpoint right
   
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Default 10-01-2011, 03:02 AM

Awesome game! Very challenging!
I beat it in 10 tries!

Title screen looks a bit weird and clustered, at least for me. Are you using a special font or is it supposed to look like this?

Glitch: If you die after pressing the button on the top left by touching the ball pit's walls, the spikes at the bottom still shoot 2 bullets at a time.
Also, if you touch the button again when the glitch above happens, only the right bullets appear.

(Edit: Finished the game on Hard! Beat it in 2 tries! )
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Default 10-01-2011, 07:13 PM

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Awesome game! Very challenging!
I beat it in 10 tries!

Title screen looks a bit weird and clustered, at least for me. Are you using a special font or is it supposed to look like this?

Glitch: If you die after pressing the button on the top left by touching the ball pit's walls, the spikes at the bottom still shoot 2 bullets at a time.
Also, if you touch the button again when the glitch above happens, only the right bullets appear.

(Edit: Finished the game on Hard! Beat it in 2 tries! )
well you probs fast forwarded it :P, and yea i used a special font that probably doesnt show upo on your computer
   
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Default 10-01-2011, 07:19 PM

Yah, the collisions aren't the best, but hey...I gave it an honest review


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dont quite understand, you know that after every time you get past 25/30 seconds, you have to get the checkpoint right
Yah I know. But still, if you die after the 30 seconds, it restarts anyway and that is bad.


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