Matrix Shot

[jediaction]

Originally Posted by x2495iiii

Problems:

No muzzle flash.

Smoke wasn't facing the camera, making it look 2-d.

Guy's face goes down to much when the gun fires. An experienced shooter would brace for recoil so as not to lose sight of their target.

Most if not all handguns eject their shell casings to the right, not the left (a mistake both of us made, it looks like). There is some variance as to how far forward the casing are angled, though.

Desert Eagles, it so happens, eject shell casings almost straight up in the air (slightly to the right), as they're known to strike inexperienced shooters in the face after firing.

Other than that, not bad.

I know. Everything you just said, I know, the sehll i kinda did not see what the muzzle flash and the smoke, it would look weird to have the smoke facing the camera but thanks for feed back. Everyone else too, thanks. Im posting 1.4

[room14]

Originally Posted by room14

ball bouncing!

i beat my self
can anyone make it better?

[jediaction]

Please. Dont change the subject on this thread. Yes, i can help but please put this on a new thread

[debussybunny563]

It's very good, but I have to be really nitpicky on this if you're going to claim it's the best (which right now it definitely is). The 'bullet' that exits the barrel looks like an entire cartridge, which is later ejected out the side. Also, as X said, make the cartridge fly to the right. Guns are designed that way so the the cartridges are ejected further away from the shooter so as to not hurt them. However, if you're left handed...

[jediaction]

Originally Posted by debussybunny563

It's very good, but I have to be really nitpicky on this if you're going to claim it's the best (which right now it definitely is). The 'bullet' that exits the barrel looks like an entire cartridge, which is later ejected out the side. Also, as X said, make the cartridge fly to the right. Guns are designed that way so the the cartridges are ejected further away from the shooter so as to not hurt them. However, if you're left handed...

got it

EDIT: got it, and its posted

[debussybunny563]

I like the extra person you added. However, the fact that you had to zoom out for the shot revealed the guy's entire body, and it looks very weird when he kind of tips to one side (his lower body is static). Of course, I'm being nitpicky, but another thing you could add to the policeman is make his body kind of 'bounce' when he hits the ground. In other words, make the impact more realistic. He hits the ground and then his upper body remains stationary while his legs fall down. But, for the short time this has been around, it's very good!

[jediaction]

UH, i guess. I made that in like 10 minutes. Not the big part of the game. Its just the gun shot that was supposed to be good

[zhigc]

that looks really cool, Just needs to happen quicker

[GoGators]

Can I use this in my movie?

[jediaction]

Sure, just give credit. Ok, thanks for all your comments guys