The first level of my RPG

11:53 AM

This would be a demo/prologue. It is simplly for now just to showcase bulk of the foundation engine I have planned for this RPG. (This will also have a fighting component as well. Not included.)

Tell me what you think, and how I can improve. I have a lot planned just not implemented yet.

The story will be much deeper as I build, but it is not a dark, brooding, antsy, RPG of today. so sorry.

EDIT1: July 29, 2009, 3:33. (I added some scenery, more plot, and shortened the length of the meaningless walking.)

EDIT2: August 3, 2009, 6:36 (added part 2, updated some other things, added more characters) IT'S UP!!! (this verison is not perfect. needs more debug time.)

x2495iiii · 07-28-2009, 05:51 PM

I really like what you've done with that, great work. I hope you finish this.

I'm actually working on two RPG's with different combat systems. If you'd like help making yours, or would like to look at one of the ones I'm making, feel free to ask.

07-29-2009, 05:55 PM

small update.

x2495iiii · 07-30-2009, 02:10 AM

Still very good. I do like the fact that the text is more organized now.

08:46 PM

Thanks X, I have done more and WILL have an update tonight.

EDIT: Update is coming Tomorrow morning. I am ready I swear. My Computer is not working properly. Check tomorrow. I am so sorry.

x2495iiii · 08-04-2009, 10:58 PM

Not a problem. Just builds suspense.

11:54 AM

Your story continues.

(I spent 4-5 hours on this yesterday. I went to upload it and had ten minutes before I had to leave and my computer wouldn't let me upload the file. So I fixed the posts barely before the comp crashes. This morning I restarted the comp and copied the file to my usb. I went to a different computer to upload this level.)

x2495iiii · 08-05-2009, 12:16 PM

Very nice. I like the way the story is progressing.

I have a few suggestions, though. I think that there should be an option to talk to characters again after they've "fulfilled their role" so to speak. Also, the characters should probably move from their action poses (like Leaf putting his hand back down when he's done giving you the berries, or Zen putting her arms down when she's done thinking).

02:58 PM

Thanks. That's a good idea and should be easy to add. Some have a second converstaion but most don't. I'll clear that up then develop my combat engine.

EDIT: I've added/fixed stuff. Update coming soon. I will make another topic to better descibe this ongoing devolpment.

Here is the thread.
http://alice.org/community/showthread.php?t=2946

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	#2 (permalink)
x2495iiii Super Moderator Status: Offline Posts: 3,508 Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: Somewhere in the Continental U.S.	07-28-2009, 05:51 PM I really like what you've done with that, great work. I hope you finish this. I'm actually working on two RPG's with different combat systems. If you'd like help making yours, or would like to look at one of the ones I'm making, feel free to ask. (')>

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Veryuhbull Guest Status: Posts: n/a	07-29-2009, 05:55 PM small update.

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x2495iiii Super Moderator Status: Offline Posts: 3,508 Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: Somewhere in the Continental U.S.	07-30-2009, 02:10 AM Still very good. I do like the fact that the text is more organized now. (')>

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Veryuhbull Guest Status: Posts: n/a	08-04-2009, 10:49 AM Thanks X, I have done more and WILL have an update tonight. EDIT: Update is coming Tomorrow morning. I am ready I swear. My Computer is not working properly. Check tomorrow. I am so sorry. Last edited by Veryuhbull; 08-04-2009 at 08:46 PM.

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x2495iiii Super Moderator Status: Offline Posts: 3,508 Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: Somewhere in the Continental U.S.	08-04-2009, 10:58 PM Not a problem. Just builds suspense. (')>

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Veryuhbull Guest Status: Posts: n/a	PART 2 finished. - 08-05-2009, 10:17 AM Your story continues. (I spent 4-5 hours on this yesterday. I went to upload it and had ten minutes before I had to leave and my computer wouldn't let me upload the file. So I fixed the posts barely before the comp crashes. This morning I restarted the comp and copied the file to my usb. I went to a different computer to upload this level.) Last edited by Veryuhbull; 08-05-2009 at 11:54 AM.

	#8 (permalink)
x2495iiii Super Moderator Status: Offline Posts: 3,508 Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: Somewhere in the Continental U.S.	08-05-2009, 12:16 PM Very nice. I like the way the story is progressing. I have a few suggestions, though. I think that there should be an option to talk to characters again after they've "fulfilled their role" so to speak. Also, the characters should probably move from their action poses (like Leaf putting his hand back down when he's done giving you the berries, or Zen putting her arms down when she's done thinking). (')>

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Veryuhbull Guest Status: Posts: n/a	08-05-2009, 12:30 PM Thanks. That's a good idea and should be easy to add. Some have a second converstaion but most don't. I'll clear that up then develop my combat engine. EDIT: I've added/fixed stuff. Update coming soon. I will make another topic to better descibe this ongoing devolpment. Here is the thread. http://alice.org/community/showthread.php?t=2946 Last edited by Veryuhbull; 08-05-2009 at 02:58 PM.