This is a movie I spent a good amount of time on. I made it about a week ago but finally I figured out how to shrink down the file size so I could upload it. Enjoy! Please post comments.
EDIT: I reloaded the video with the sound fixed.
Last edited by Veryuhbull; 07-14-2009 at 05:34 PM.
Reason: Problems have been solved.
Very well done. I noticed two typos ("I paniced and shot him." and "..the two duelists were farther and son."), but other than that very good job. I especially liked the red camera effect you put on to symbolize death.
The camera angles were nice, it was an interesting story, and the music definitely pushed the emotions.
I think for an alice movie, it definitely rates a 5/5 but can I suggest something? I didn't get the hint with the black screen and kept watching the film waiting for something to happen. Maybe Just roll yourself some credits while the music finishes would add a nice move-like touch.
Now the only thing that I was a bit iffy about was your spelling. You made quite a bit of spelling mistakes and that distracted from the actual video. Just saying.