12-17-2008, 06:51 PM
That's very good! I'd change the opening dialogue to something more serious, though. Also, unless that green guy WASN'T really a zombie, you should have him just find the scientist first, then the zombie, since the zombies (you said) only eat and never stop. Finally, when he wakes up in front of the bookshelf (if you're keeping that scene), turn the camera so that the user has to kind of look around for the gun a little bit, instead of it being right in front of them.
Awesome idea though, keep it up!
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