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Default my first Alive project - 03-08-2011, 04:37 PM

please tell me what you all think and what i have done wrong/ what i could do better. thanks!
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Default 03-08-2011, 08:05 PM

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please tell me what you all think and what i have done wrong/ what i could do better. thanks!
alot of things are pretty bad here

1. i had no idea what that was even supposed to be about
2. When things move they just slide
3. Things happened too quickly, use "wait" methods
   
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Default 03-09-2011, 02:35 AM

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alot of things are pretty bad here

1. i had no idea what that was even supposed to be about
2. When things move they just slide
3. Things happened too quickly, use "wait" methods
1. its just a wizard killin shit.
2. i cbf makin a wolf run method
3. it was ment to be fast.

but thanks for checkin it out
   
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Default 03-10-2011, 05:35 PM

That was a great first alice project. Keep up the work
   
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